Well, it was ok
It was ok, but it was just too weird.
I mean, ya, some weird flashs work out really well but
this was just....er, hard to describe,....er,....i dont know to be honest...
Anyway, the point is that it wasnt that bad.#
Animate ALL cuts the next time and dont repeat them as much.
My favourite flash of yours is Bumper Car Gremlin.
I saw that well over a year now on another site and since then, ive been keeping an eye out for your work.
Learn from that flash.
Mybe more story next time.
Anyway, good enough.
Keep trying.